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When inheriting his father’s car, Tom is exposed to all his secrets and while trying to re-establish with his ex-girlfriend, is forced to deal with the consequences of these revelations.
Based on the comments above and what I read into your plot, how about: After finding family secrets in his deceased father's car, a bachelor must resolve their horrific outcomes to win back his girl. Not saying mine is good, just?suggesting it as an alternative to trigger lateral thinking.
Based on the comments above and what I read into your plot, how about:
After finding family secrets in his deceased father’s car, a bachelor must resolve their horrific outcomes to win back his girl.
Not saying mine is good, just?suggesting it as an alternative to trigger lateral thinking.
See lessA hometown bound 60 year old veteran is forced to reunite with his family across stranger seas. Right when he is about to leave behind his home, he finds companionship in his 30 year old neighbor. But when the inevitable D day arrives, he must lose one family to gain another.
Must confess I'm confused. ?Hometown bound but about to leave? ?Does D-Day mean WWII? Try to write it in one sentence in Karel's format "When xxx happens, aaa must bbb to yyy" where xx is inciting incident, aaa is main character etc. I seriously struggle to write a good logline from my own stories,Read more
Must confess I’m confused. ?Hometown bound but about to leave? ?Does D-Day mean WWII?
Try to write it in one sentence in Karel’s format “When xxx happens, aaa must bbb to yyy” where xx is inciting incident, aaa is main character etc.
I seriously struggle to write a good logline from my own stories, because I’m too close to them. We need to step back and view the entirety from a viewer perspective, not our writing intent.
See lessTo forgive the woman who triggered his father?s suicide, a man must risk everything to return his lucky pendant to its origin in the Brazilian jungle
I'm struggling with the logline for this, because the protagonist doesn't have a specific goal - it's a "journey of recovery" story.Act I: Alex is wealthy, wary of relationships, and his only family is his Father. Inciting incident: Family fortune is stolen, Father is declared bankrupt and suicides.Read more
I’m struggling with the logline for this, because the protagonist doesn’t have a specific goal – it’s a “journey of recovery” story.
Act I: Alex is wealthy, wary of relationships, and his only family is his Father.
Inciting incident: Family fortune is stolen, Father is declared bankrupt and suicides.
Act IIa: ?Alex becomes successful, suffers serious injury, discovers his great-grandfather’s lucky pendant points SE and decides to track it to “relax and heal” ?He meets and falls for a girl.
MRP: The girl is the daughter of the accountant who stole the family fortune. ?Alex initiates legal proceedings against the Accountant.
Act IIb: Alex resumes his search, is betrayed by his guide, captured by a Cartel gang, and struggles alone in the Brazilian jungle.
Act III: He finds a Mesoamerican funerary chamber and returns the pendant to its place.
Act IV: He learns?about his father, has a catharsis and wins back the girl.
Any suggestions on how to logline it greatly welcome.
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