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  1. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

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    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 5:48 am

    The SIN ? hmmmm - An alienated couple and one (the protag) has an extremely high life Insurance. The other one leads all of his wife?s/flings into the Woods where his partner in crime kills them. Sorry Robert, it's the same thing but only different! The (incomplete?) logline I like best: An estrangeRead more

    The SIN ? hmmmm – An alienated couple and one (the protag) has an extremely high life Insurance. The other one leads all of his wife?s/flings into the Woods where his partner in crime kills them. Sorry Robert, it’s the same thing but only different!

    The (incomplete?) logline I like best:

    An estranged couple decides for a counseling retreat in the woods just to meet the therapist of their nightmares.

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

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    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 5:36 am

    OK I now for a fact that Frugals recommendation works, I read a script of a friend of mine, Robert Arthur Jansen, that was set up like this: " Link the sin to a marital discretion, (lying, cheating, etc,) for example, and connect one of the partners to the killer ? like ex boyfriend, or partner in cRead more

    OK I now for a fact that Frugals recommendation works, I read a script of a friend of mine, Robert Arthur Jansen, that was set up like this: ” Link the sin to a marital discretion, (lying, cheating, etc,) for example, and connect one of the partners to the killer ? like ex boyfriend, or partner in crime, etc.. Then the main action affects both the outer story (escape from the killer) and the inner story (atone for your sins).”

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

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    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 5:22 am

    Yess FFF, but not all the time. I agree with "a symbolic power".

    Yess FFF, but not all the time. I agree with “a symbolic power”.

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