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After an unsuccessful journalist from Greece, who lives at subsistence level, and his childhood sweetheart from Germany meet again, he wants to prove to her that their relationship can work, and that he can bring structure in his chaotic life before she carries back to her job as a flight attendant.
Thanks a lot @Knightrider. Your feedback is great! I really appreciate it!
Thanks a lot Knightrider1984. Your feedback is great! I really appreciate it!
See lessAfter an unsuccessful journalist from Greece, who lives at subsistence level, and his childhood sweetheart from Germany meet again, he wants to prove to her that their relationship can work, and that he can bring structure in his chaotic life before she carries back to her job as a flight attendant.
Subsistence level means that he lives under bad conditions, because he doesn't earn much money. He is lying on his conditions and tellls the girl that he lives a good life and is happy with it. Maybe I could put this as a conflict in the story. Thanks for your feedback! Could you help me with that lRead more
Subsistence level means that he lives under bad conditions, because he doesn’t earn much money.
He is lying on his conditions and tellls the girl that he lives a good life and is happy with it. Maybe I could put this as a conflict in the story.
Thanks for your feedback!
Could you help me with that logline too? https://loglines.org/a-middle-aged-business-consultant-who-suffers-from-an-identity-crisis-gets-in-contact-with-his-childhood-sweetheart-by-an-older-letter-and-wins-new-courage-to-face-life-and-follow-his-former-passion/
Thank you in advance!
See lessA perfectionist middle-aged business consultant gets in contact with his childhood sweetheart by an older letter which reminds him of their promise to marry with 35 years, but his flare up feelings are against his lonely structured lifestyle and she is already engaged and will marry soon.
The main goal is getting the girl. Maybe something like: A perfectionist middle-aged business consultant gets in contact with his childhood sweetheart by an older letter which reminds him of their promise to marry with 35 years, but his flare up feelings are against his lonely lifestyle and she is aRead more
The main goal is getting the girl.
Maybe something like:
A perfectionist middle-aged business consultant gets in contact with his childhood sweetheart by an older letter which reminds him of their promise to marry with 35 years, but his flare up feelings are against his lonely lifestyle and she is already engaged and will marry soon.
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