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Desperate for independence from his workaholic parents, a smart but lazy teenage boy starts his own business but discovers he must take risks to succeed.
Everything fine, but you should define what risks he has to take in order to achieve his goal. What does he have to overcome to solve his problems? All the best!
Everything fine, but you should define what risks he has to take in order to achieve his goal. What does he have to overcome to solve his problems?
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A nostalgic adventurer returns to Greece to avoid the sale of his grand parents house in a week, but faces his coquettish parents who reject his lifestyle and blackmail him with the house, and his sandbox love as a badass broker who needs every cent during the financial crisis.
Well, thank you for your feedback, guys. I really appreciate that. It's hard to write a short and on point logline. I guess I have some work to do. Actually, do you think it's a good motivation for a character to return to an old house to avoid the selling. I'm in the same situation, because I loveRead more
Well, thank you for your feedback, guys. I really appreciate that. It’s hard to write a short and on point logline. I guess I have some work to do.
See lessActually, do you think it’s a good motivation for a character to return to an old house to avoid the selling. I’m in the same situation, because I love the house of my grand parents and don’t want it to get sold.
The house has a lot of feelings and emotions for me, because I spent almost every summer inside of it with my grandparents.
The character will also lose his memories of his grand parents, if the house will be sold.
Abducted as a small child, a college hoop star must endure a season of unexpected obstacles when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.
You put all important elements in that logline and have a clear vision where this story is going to. I would only put more detail into the main goal of the MC: How does he want to find his long-lost dad? All the best with your work!
You put all important elements in that logline and have a clear vision where this story is going to.
I would only put more detail into the main goal of the MC: How does he want to find his long-lost dad?
All the best with your work!
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