1. Posted: September 4, 2015In:

    A woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.

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    i am just going to take the liberty: ?"when a detective receives a mysterious phone call, she dives back in the cold case of her's mother's murder."

    i am just going to take the liberty: ?”when a detective receives a mysterious phone call, she dives back in the cold case of her’s mother’s murder.”

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2015In:

    When an art fraud investigator receives a package containing a stolen diamond from a man claiming to be her long-lost brother, she discovers that her father masterminded an international diamond heist and then travels to Geneva and underground catacombs in the Siberia wilderness to locate the stolen diamonds and return them to their rightful owner in order to save her father, who she thought was dead, from the consequences

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    i like it, but stick to the essentials: ?"a fraud investigator must track down stolen diamonds in siberia in order to save her father's life"

    i like it, but stick to the essentials: ?”a fraud investigator must track down stolen diamonds in siberia in order to save her father’s life”

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2015In:

    When a jealous mother asks her 10 years old geek son to spy on his father,he finds him dating his new teacher and decides to break up the relationship by foiling their every move to save his family from disintegrating.

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    it's good, but i think it can be way shorter. ?"a ten year old boy sets out to break up his father's affair before mom finds out."

    it’s good, but i think it can be way shorter. ?”a ten year old boy sets out to break up his father’s affair before mom finds out.”

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