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His optical implant switched off for non-payment of a loan, a 22nd Century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing billionaire robotics savant, in the process uncovering a militant group of androids and a maniacal Senator hell-bent on controlling the world
Still 35 words, Cryters. I think that's too many. The "loan" part seems irrelevant to me. "Made blind when his optical implants are shut off, a futuristic PI must re-animate his hated android to help him find a missing robotic savant." (25 words)
Still 35 words, Cryters. I think that’s too many. The “loan” part seems irrelevant to me.
“Made blind when his optical implants are shut off, a futuristic PI must re-animate his hated android to help him find a missing robotic savant.” (25 words)
See lessSteven, a sexaholic who is too unattractive and undesirable to have sex, meets Liana, a fellow sex-addict who teaches other more dangerous ways to get off
I think you can shorten the redundant "unattractive and undesirable" and discard the names: "An undesirable sexaholic meets another frustrated, but gorgeous, sex addict who helps him discover more dangerous ways to get off." If we knew more about the hook, we could add more to the logline. InterestiRead more
I think you can shorten the redundant “unattractive and undesirable” and discard the names: “An undesirable sexaholic meets another frustrated, but gorgeous, sex addict who helps him discover more dangerous ways to get off.”
If we knew more about the hook, we could add more to the logline. Interesting and racy concept, though. Questions about the genre, as it can go several ways as written (comedy, drama, mystery or horror. Good job!
See lessA conniving ad executive, who moonlights at night as a homeless person, suddenly loses everything and is forced to live on the streets for real!
I like it. I'm confused, as the term "moonlights" generally means "works at night", and why would one "work" as a homeless person at night? I'm going to assume it is for his ad agency research, and if so, there may be a better way to say it. Reminds me a bit of "Trading Places" which may be well befRead more
I like it. I’m confused, as the term “moonlights” generally means “works at night”, and why would one “work” as a homeless person at night? I’m going to assume it is for his ad agency research, and if so, there may be a better way to say it. Reminds me a bit of “Trading Places” which may be well before your time. I’d love to see another “expression” of his conniveness (is that even a word?), Like “loses everything in one of his scams” and is forced…
The title seems to be a play on “Walk a Mile in My Shoes”; soul is to sole. That’s pretty good, too. Good job!
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