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  1. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    A once academically gifted young man is intent on getting his life back on track. One night while driving home, he?s nearly killed in an accident and falls for the woman who saves him, but her lies and past horror may destroy everything.

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 15, 2013 at 7:07 pm

    What happened to him? Why does he need to get his life back on track? How does she play a part in him getting his life back in order? Why would her past(unless it connects with her present/future) destroy everything? I like the logline. I'm sure you've already thought of the answers to all my questiRead more

    What happened to him? Why does he need to get his life back on track? How does she play a part in him getting his life back in order? Why would her past(unless it connects with her present/future) destroy everything?
    I like the logline. I’m sure you’ve already thought of the answers to all my questions but could perhaps be a little clearer in your logline?
    Good luck

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  2. Posted: October 13, 2013In: Public

    A teenage prankster must convince his father (a cynical cop) that their elderly neighbour is a psycopath before she kills again.

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 15, 2013 at 7:04 pm

    Sounds interesting. Here are a few concerns 1 Isn't this film very similar to 'Disturbia"?(starring Shia Lebeouf). 2 Why is the cop cynical?Why is the teenager a 'prankster' or rather what does that have to do with the plot? 3 Why is this elderly neighbor murdering people? 4 How does he figure out tRead more

    Sounds interesting. Here are a few concerns
    1 Isn’t this film very similar to ‘Disturbia”?(starring Shia Lebeouf).
    2 Why is the cop cynical?Why is the teenager a ‘prankster’ or rather what does that have to do with the plot?
    3 Why is this elderly neighbor murdering people?
    4 How does he figure out that she is a murderer?
    I’m sure you have already thought of all these things. I like it though. Sounds cool.

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  3. Posted: October 8, 2013In: Public

    When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, his friends set on a journey to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. But is it justice they seek or revenge?

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 11, 2013 at 7:35 pm

    I'll try it again. how does this work? "The inspiring true story of a rookie lawyer who learns of the brutal murder of his best friend in the streets of Karachi by a rich and powerful politician, He attempts the impossible by trying to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in powRead more

    I’ll try it again. how does this work?
    “The inspiring true story of a rookie lawyer who learns of the brutal murder of his best friend in the streets of Karachi by a rich and powerful politician, He attempts the impossible by trying to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. When he realises that the courts and people of Pakistan have failed him, he reaches a moral dilemma; Is it justice he seeks or revenge?

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