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  1. Posted: October 5, 2013In: Public

    Killing is what he is afraid of. The circumstantial choice of becoming a writer because of his past costs him desertion and rejection from her lover. The writer never gives up. After several years of exploration and reaching the new highs he becomes the Times Contributor Of the Year to prove his mettle. All fame and name is enough, but he realizes why still he is not at peace and kills himself when at his peak.

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 8, 2013 at 5:04 am

    Why isn't he happy? Why does his lover leave him? Who is he afraid of 'killing'? I agree with the comments above in that this isn't a logline rather a synopsis. Good luck with it. The idea has potential.

    Why isn’t he happy? Why does his lover leave him? Who is he afraid of ‘killing’? I agree with the comments above in that this isn’t a logline rather a synopsis. Good luck with it. The idea has potential.

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  2. Posted: October 8, 2013In: Public

    When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, his friends set on a journey to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. But is it justice they seek or revenge?

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    Added an answer on October 8, 2013 at 4:09 am

    Thank you for commenting. 1. Who? The rich boy is the same age. 2. What? The friends attempt to use the judicial system but it fails them. Should they take matters in to their own hands? Is that 'justice' or is it revenge? The fundamental question being that in a lawless land what must one do when tRead more

    Thank you for commenting.
    1. Who? The rich boy is the same age.
    2. What? The friends attempt to use the judicial system but it fails them. Should they take matters in to their own hands? Is that ‘justice’ or is it revenge? The fundamental question being that in a lawless land what must one do when the courts themselves are corrupt.
    3. Where? Karachi, Pakistan. One of the most dangerous cities in the world.
    4. When? I’m not sure. I’ll think about it.
    5. Why? Jealousy and the fact that they had a previous altercation over a girl.
    Thank you again for your help.

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  3. Posted: October 6, 2013In: Public

    Batman is being sought for the murder of ex-cons, cops, and Rachel Dawes. Commisioner Gordon meets a man named "StrongMan" who tells him he can capture Batman. Mr. Gordon grants him immunity for any crimes he many commit in capturing Batman. However Strongman is working for an underground mob. Due to the events that have unfolded Batman has fallen into a deep depression.

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    Added an answer on October 8, 2013 at 3:53 am

    I'm confused. Is strongman inspired by the character 'The tattooed Strongman' from the comics? Why him? Why would Gordon who knows Batman is innocent( in all films,literature and cartoon) want him dead? Furthermore having a good relationship with Batman couldn't he easily do so himself?( Turn on theRead more

    I’m confused. Is strongman inspired by the character ‘The tattooed Strongman’ from the comics? Why him? Why would Gordon who knows Batman is innocent( in all films,literature and cartoon) want him dead? Furthermore having a good relationship with Batman couldn’t he easily do so himself?( Turn on the bat signal) Why would Batman be depressed? What sets this particular story apart? How is it different to ‘the dark knight rises’? In the sense that Strongman and his Mob are similar to Bane and his mob. The concept of Batman’s depression and him going in hiding is also very similar to the first hour of the ‘the dark knight rises’? Can you get the rights from DC comics? Are you familiar with the animated film ‘Under the Red Hood’. Its a batman film with a great storyline. I would go with something along those lines. Anyways big fan of Batman. Good luck.

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