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A no-nonsense matriarch helps her estranged husband beat his alcohol addiction and repair their marriage for the sake of her son's sanity, after he invites a homeless boy – who thinks he is Peter Pan – to live with them.
I'm sensing the "Peter Pan" ends up being the one to solve the issue? Perhaps writing the story from his angle where this boy is drawn in to this dysfunctional family may help you nail the plot a little tighter. As dgp said, you have too much going on with the way it's written.
I’m sensing the “Peter Pan” ends up being the one to solve the issue? Perhaps writing the story from his angle where this boy is drawn in to this dysfunctional family may help you nail the plot a little tighter. As dgp said, you have too much going on with the way it’s written.
See lessA bored accountant, disenchanted with life, thinks she?ll get a break on the ski slopes. Until she gets into a ski accident with a famous actor, who will do anything, including inventing a fake relationship, and turning her world upside down, to stay on top
@ Vania - The short answer is the ski accident is essential because the inspiration behind this is the Sundance Film Festival, which is smack dab in the center of ski season. And the film festival atmosphere is integral to the plot for a number of reasons
@ Vania – The short answer is the ski accident is essential because the inspiration behind this is the Sundance Film Festival, which is smack dab in the center of ski season. And the film festival atmosphere is integral to the plot for a number of reasons
See lessHeartbroken after being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, a guy?s best friends devise the perfect plan for his recovery and teach him how to sleep with as many women as humanly possible.
As a woman, I would not see that movie with that title. Why is it called "The Killing Spree"? Does he kill the women after so they don't talk? Why not take the road that millions of other men do, and just not call the next day? As bec mentioned, it might be popular with a young-mid male market, butRead more
As a woman, I would not see that movie with that title. Why is it called “The Killing Spree”? Does he kill the women after so they don’t talk? Why not take the road that millions of other men do, and just not call the next day?
As bec mentioned, it might be popular with a young-mid male market, but they’d have to wait for it to get out of theaters as this would be a guaranteed “R”.
Personally I think you could open it up to a broader range by changing the title. Have him learn from his friends how to pick up girls, he can figure out his way to the bedroom from there.
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