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  1. Posted: August 25, 2013In: Public

    When a young bride of an American couple living in Italy is surprised by a pregnancy, she will do all she can to hide the baby bump before her homesick husband decides to pull the plug on her Tuscan paradise and her budding art career.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2013 at 6:32 pm

    So she wants to stay, he wants to leave. Not sure why a pregnancy would immediatley throw it to his side of the debate...as Richiev pointed out, they have hospitals in Italy... Why does the husband want to return to the States? Family? A better job? What you need to do is pit his dreams against hersRead more

    So she wants to stay, he wants to leave. Not sure why a pregnancy would immediatley throw it to his side of the debate…as Richiev pointed out, they have hospitals in Italy… Why does the husband want to return to the States? Family? A better job? What you need to do is pit his dreams against hers.

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  2. Posted: July 8, 2013In: Public

    Set in St. Louis in the 1920s, washed up baseball player Will Cosgrove is a private eye with his older brother Ross. When Ross goes missing, Will stumbles upon a deep secret that the disease taking over the town is not quite what it seems and a mob boss turned Governor will do anything to keep the town?s secret from being revealed.

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2013 at 11:35 am

    I've noticed one thing you've done on a few of your loglines is mentioning the era and location. In both cases, I think you could do without them (the other is the bank robbery in the Dust Bowl). Hope that helps somewhat.

    I’ve noticed one thing you’ve done on a few of your loglines is mentioning the era and location. In both cases, I think you could do without them (the other is the bank robbery in the Dust Bowl). Hope that helps somewhat.

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  3. Posted: July 23, 2013In: Public

    A young woman, kidnapped when she was a kid, returns home to the family she barely remembers and struggles to feel ?at home.?

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2013 at 11:21 am

    This sounds like a movie I would see - after I've seen commercials (and maybe a movie poster). Your logline needs to be a bit more fleshed out, and detailed.

    This sounds like a movie I would see – after I’ve seen commercials (and maybe a movie poster). Your logline needs to be a bit more fleshed out, and detailed.

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