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When thousands are trapped in the world's most popular MMO, a burnt-out game master must learn to play the game she once ruled in order track down a hacker with a grudge, before he uses the first Boss event to threaten the entire server.
Yes, I've watched SAO, and this story kind of grew out of my frustration over all the parts I felt they skimmed over. My protagonist is actually one of the game administers, employed by the game company, so it looks like I'll have to change the description a bit to help that come through. Thanks!
Yes, I’ve watched SAO, and this story kind of grew out of my frustration over all the parts I felt they skimmed over. My protagonist is actually one of the game administers, employed by the game company, so it looks like I’ll have to change the description a bit to help that come through. Thanks!
See lessWhen a time travelling cover-band frontman steals hits before they're famous, his musical idol descends into a suicidal depression and to save his life he must overcome his lust for fame.
Very good, until you get to the part after "suicidal depression." I'm pretty sure you mean that the hero must overcome his lust for fame in order to save his idol's life, but all the "he" and "his" pronouns obscure that meaning. Try reordering for clarity. Otherwise, a very interesting concept.
Very good, until you get to the part after “suicidal depression.” I’m pretty sure you mean that the hero must overcome his lust for fame in order to save his idol’s life, but all the “he” and “his” pronouns obscure that meaning. Try reordering for clarity.
Otherwise, a very interesting concept.
See lessAfter suffering a mental breakdown a depressed businessman attempts to rebuild his life with his estranged wife, but when he meets a carefree barista he begins to question what it takes to truly be happy.
Another possibility would be to flip genders here. Have it be a depressed business woman meeting a charming barista-guy at the local Starbucks. If you keep the MC as a man, you could defy audience expectations by having the wife actively fight for her husband, or by having the barista turn out to beRead more
Another possibility would be to flip genders here. Have it be a depressed business woman meeting a charming barista-guy at the local Starbucks.
If you keep the MC as a man, you could defy audience expectations by having the wife actively fight for her husband, or by having the barista turn out to be engaged already? She may be everything he thinks he wants, but not really what he needs.
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