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  1. Posted: October 9, 2020In: Thriller

    After accidentally causing the death of her boss, an over-worked, guilt-ridden barmaid must avoid suspicion, while at the same deflecting the advances of her lascivious co-worker

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    Added an answer on October 9, 2020 at 10:55 pm

    After accidentally serving her boss arsenic....

    After accidentally serving her boss arsenic….

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  2. Posted: September 24, 2020In: SciFi

    Three interwined stories between a group of astronauts in space finding them race against time to find their way home to Earth.

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    Replied to answer on October 8, 2020 at 11:24 pm

    Are there other anthology space films? I can't think of one. What does it compare to? Something like Cloud Atlas perhaps, where all the stories share a common thread?

    Are there other anthology space films? I can’t think of one.
    What does it compare to?
    Something like Cloud Atlas perhaps, where all the stories share a common thread?

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  3. Posted: October 2, 2020In: Television

    A murdered ex-con is resurrected and blessed with the power to heal. He must learn to be a saint when others would rather him be a sinner.

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    Added an answer on October 8, 2020 at 10:28 pm

    I think the original logline is pretty good - I agree that I want to hear who the "other" are. My go at it: "A murdered ex-con is resurrected and blessed with the power to heal. He must learn to be a saint; his old gang is determined to keep him be a sinner." "Old gang" is very specific. "Keep him aRead more

    I think the original logline is pretty good – I agree that I want to hear who the “other” are.

    My go at it:

    “A murdered ex-con is resurrected and blessed with the power to heal. He must learn to be a saint; his old gang is determined to keep him be a sinner.”

    “Old gang” is very specific.
    “Keep him a sinner” implies that he was indeed a bad guy when he was murdered. I think his arc is more dramatic if that was the case.

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