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  1. Posted: September 28, 2020In: Coming of Age

    A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2020 at 11:55 pm

    My take: "A witty comedian who fears showing his feelings must learn how to support an an old friend who is shattered by his daughter's cancer diagnosis." I changed it from losing an old woman to losing a young woman, that is much more intense and difficult to process. Burying a child is perhaps theRead more

    My take:

    “A witty comedian who fears showing his feelings must learn how to support an an old friend who is shattered by his daughter’s cancer diagnosis.”

    I changed it from losing an old woman to losing a young woman, that is much more intense and difficult to process. Burying a child is perhaps the single most painful experience a parent can have.

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  2. Posted: September 26, 2020In: SciFi

    REVISED: After WW III, a grieving journeyman electrician trapped in a secret underground AI lab, discovers two other survivors. Two arch enemies, both soliciting his help and holding the key to his escape, redemption and the future of humanity.

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    Replied to answer on October 5, 2020 at 12:16 pm

    Hi dpg, I think your question was probably rhetorical but I wrote out my answer and this helped me a lot. Thank you! --------------------------------------------- Both MEG (an AI) and Dr. Emery (the programmer who created MEG) need Kyle's help to further their goals. MEG needs Kyle's help to be a roRead more

    Hi dpg,

    I think your question was probably rhetorical but I wrote out my answer and this helped me a lot. Thank you!
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    Both MEG (an AI) and Dr. Emery (the programmer who created MEG) need Kyle’s help to further their goals.

    MEG needs Kyle’s help to be a role model for HOPE (the baby AI) – he will provide a moral framework for HOPE’s interactions with humanity. (Something that MEG did not have) In this sense Kyle has the moral compass necessary to raise a healthy child.

    Dr. Emery needs Kyle’s help to escape in from the sub level she is trapped in by the AI. Kyle has the technical skills and the physical ability to trek to sub level F and engage the manual override that will free Dr. Emery.

    Dr. Emery wants to destroy MEG (and HOPE). MEG wants to keep Dr. Emery trapped in the sub level.

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  3. Posted: September 26, 2020In: SciFi

    REVISED: After WW III, a grieving journeyman electrician trapped in a secret underground AI lab, discovers two other survivors. Two arch enemies, both soliciting his help and holding the key to his escape, redemption and the future of humanity.

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    Replied to answer on September 27, 2020 at 10:18 am

    Wow, thanks Odie! This is super helpful.

    Wow, thanks Odie! This is super helpful.

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