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When an image conscious love expert falls for the wrong guy, a crass hacker geek, her page views plummet, forcing her ruthless producer to manipulate her insecurities to tear them apart. 31 Words (Revised) (RomCom)
How about this? "When an online relationship expert is dumped by her boyfriend, she must overcome her producer's self-serving advice and her own emotional insecurities to find happiness." (26 words)
How about this?
“When an online relationship expert is dumped by her boyfriend, she must overcome her producer’s self-serving advice and her own emotional insecurities to find happiness.” (26 words)
See lessIn the near future when an upgraded police droid becomes able to think and feel, it must learn to survive in a violent world where everyone wants to exploit its humanoid consciousness.
You could lighten things up on the front end, "In the near future, when ?police droid..." or even shorten to "When a police droid..." Does it matter that it's the "near" future? If it's a police droid we know it's in the future already. Also ?with the phrase "becomes sentient", ?you could cut down oRead more
You could lighten things up on the front end,
“In the near future, when ?police droid…”
or even shorten to
“When a police droid…”
Does it matter that it’s the “near” future? If it’s a police droid we know it’s in the future already.
Also ?with the phrase “becomes sentient”, ?you could cut down on the word count.
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See lessWhen her mad-scientist sister finds a way to channel through to her autistic son’s mind, a desperate mother finds out it eventually let a door open to another realm.
All of these suggestions imply two way traffic to the world that is accessed and that bad things are on the other side. "opens a gateway to a hostile world" "opens a portal.." "opens a bridge" "opens a link to a savage world..."
All of these suggestions imply two way traffic to the world that is accessed and that bad things are on the other side.
“opens a gateway to a hostile world”
“opens a portal..”
“opens a bridge”
“opens a link to a savage world…”
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