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Massacres and mysterious disappearings are occuring in the Kabyle mountain regions of Algeria by a dangerous beast. A professional hunter is engaged by authorities to track down the creature and eliminate it, he will soon realize the task won’t be as simple as his previous achievements.
I think your log line would sound better as follows - When an expert hunter discovers a ferocious beast, he risks his reputation if he doesn’t pursue and capture it to save a village at the expense of endangering his team mates. What do you think?
I think your log line would sound better as follows –
When an expert hunter discovers a ferocious beast, he risks his reputation if he doesn’t pursue and capture it to save a village at the expense of endangering his team mates.
What do you think?
See lessMassacres and mysterious disappearings are occuring in the Kabyle mountain regions of Algeria by a dangerous beast. A professional hunter is engaged by authorities to track down the creature and eliminate it, he will soon realize the task won’t be as simple as his previous achievements.
“he’s†Not the protagonist. Best in a logline to state the protagonist upfront. Best to start...â€When (protagonist). Say what happens/occurs...then what they must do or not do and why...and what will be the result if or if the goal isn’t met.
“he’s†Not the protagonist. Best in a logline to state the protagonist upfront.
Best to start…â€When (protagonist). Say what happens/occurs…then what they must do or not do and why…and what will be the result if or if the goal isn’t met.
See lessAfter being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.
Why does it matter that the protagonist is a farmer ? What you’ve described is “a peace loving ethical†person who must behave in an adverse way to his usual values and strength of character or stand witnessing the destruction of his town and possible murder of his girlfriend. If you weave theRead more
Why does it matter that the protagonist is a farmer ?
What you’ve described is “a peace loving ethical†person who must behave in an adverse way to his usual values and strength of character or stand witnessing the destruction of his town and possible murder of his girlfriend.
If you weave these aspectS of the story into a 30 word summary, you’ll achieve a much stronger log line.
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