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An ambitious and completely unscrupulous young man uses his guts and his guile to become one of the biggest oilmen in Oklahoma. In the end, after years of backstabbing and dirty dealings, he must fight the enemies earned over a lifetime to hang on to his empire.
Gilgamesh and Nir Shelter, thanks for taking the time to crit my logline. The story is mostly about the MC's rise to the top, but that serves to set up the battle in the end. Good idea re: being more specific about the antagonist.
Gilgamesh and Nir Shelter, thanks for taking the time to crit my logline. The story is mostly about the MC’s rise to the top, but that serves to set up the battle in the end. Good idea re: being more specific about the antagonist.
See lessAn ambitious and completely unscrupulous young man uses his guts and his guile to become one of the biggest oilmen in Oklahoma. In the end, after years of backstabbing and dirty dealings, he must fight the enemies earned over a lifetime to hang on to his empire.
Gilgamesh and Nir Shelter, thanks for taking the time to crit my logline. The story is mostly about the MC's rise to the top, but that serves to set up the battle in the end. Good idea re: being more specific about the antagonist.
Gilgamesh and Nir Shelter, thanks for taking the time to crit my logline. The story is mostly about the MC’s rise to the top, but that serves to set up the battle in the end. Good idea re: being more specific about the antagonist.
See lessA ruthlessly ambitious farmboy connives his way to the top of the Oklahoma oil business during its early boom days. In the end, after years of backstabbing and dirty dealings, he must fight the enemies earned over a lifetime to hang on to his empire.
I just noticed that I used "it's" instead of "its". My bad. I can't figure out how to correct it.
I just noticed that I used “it’s” instead of “its”. My bad. I can’t figure out how to correct it.
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