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  1. Posted: August 6, 2012In: Public

    "The self- help guide to life " ( provisional title)

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    Added an answer on August 11, 2012 at 6:54 pm

    Take 2: To please her dying mother by winning back her ex, a conservative librarian turns to self help books, but when she meets a bikie with the same addiction she is forced to choose between the two.

    Take 2: To please her dying mother by winning back her ex, a conservative librarian turns to self help books, but when she meets a bikie with the same addiction she is forced to choose between the two.

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  2. Posted: August 9, 2012In: Public

    Henry, a pool hustler from the lower east side of New York City, marries an illegal immigrant for money to pay his debts. This choice takes them both down an unprecedented journey of self- discovery.

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    Added an answer on August 10, 2012 at 11:06 pm

    The initial concept sounds good and as if it could be done reasonably cheaply also. You could make it a little tighter and possibly give more of an idea of the goal of Henry, as well as how the story progresses

    The initial concept sounds good and as if it could be done reasonably cheaply also. You could make it a little tighter and possibly give more of an idea of the goal of Henry, as well as how the story progresses

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  3. Posted: August 9, 2012In: Public

    Australia. 1916. After the death toll at Gallipoli, a group of friends are forced to choose between their lives at home or the call of duty in France. They soon find themselves in some of the worst battles the world had ever seen.

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    Added an answer on August 10, 2012 at 9:24 pm

    This doesnt seem to be a LOGLINE so much as a promotional ad or the beginning of your synopsis. As an idea it's likely to end up being quite a high budget film?? If so this is something you need to also consider, in terms of its viability. The Australian element could add an interesting twist to somRead more

    This doesnt seem to be a LOGLINE so much as a promotional ad or the beginning of your synopsis. As an idea it’s likely to end up being quite a high budget film?? If so this is something you need to also consider, in terms of its viability. The Australian element could add an interesting twist to some already very done stories in cinema. You need to condense it a lot more, choose a main protagonist with a vital flaw and give some idea of a key point of the story- at the moment, all we are getting from this is that well be watching a lot of battles ( external conflict is obvious but currently this idea seems without a key characters internal conflict which satisfies our need as humans to see a primal goal being accomplished)

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