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When his wife and daughter are both kidnapped and held in different locations, an emotionally stunted man must choose which one to save in a race against time.
This is pretty clean. You?ve got a problem, a time constraint, a villain, a proactive goal, and a protagonist with some depth. Your villain and time constraint are vague. And emotionally stunted sounds kind of weird (war vet, PTSD, BPD)... But I don't think I can improve it. If I tried, it wouldnt fRead more
This is pretty clean. You?ve got a problem, a time constraint, a villain, a proactive goal, and a protagonist with some depth.
Your villain and time constraint are vague. And emotionally stunted sounds kind of weird (war vet, PTSD, BPD)…
But I don’t think I can improve it. If I tried, it wouldnt fit your story but here goes.
When his wife and daughter are both kidnapped and held in different locations, this Vietnam war vet must choose which one to save from the mercenaries.
See lessWhen a superhero is infected with his engineered plague, her ex-boyfriend escapes from prison to steal from a military lab and create a cure before the woman he loves dies in three days.
I agree with everybody. Also, we're going to know if he rescues her, he still cares. We're going to know there's an urgency because it's a plague. Maybe you could save those words and give more about who he has to go up against like CMathias suggested. I tried to boil it down but all I got was: WhenRead more
I agree with everybody.
Also, we’re going to know if he rescues her, he still cares. We’re going to know there’s an urgency because it’s a plague. Maybe you could save those words and give more about who he has to go up against like CMathias suggested.
I tried to boil it down but all I got was:
When an engineered plague infects a superhero, her human ex-boyfriend must escape prison and infiltrate military-secure facilities to obtain the antidote.
See lessA drug addicted private investigator must partner up with an android detective to solve?the mystery of how and why his sister induced an AI to murder her.
I like the android detective part.?That's pretty much it. I'm not interested in watching yet another drug-addled human do anything and I'm not sci-fy-ie enough to wonder how she induced an AI to murder her so that would go right past me. But I liked Data and if your android had some emotional confliRead more
I like the android detective part.?That’s pretty much it. I’m not interested in watching yet another drug-addled human do anything and I’m not sci-fy-ie enough to wonder how she induced an AI to murder her so that would go right past me. But I liked Data and if your android had some emotional conflict or could demonstrate frustration with how illogical the situation is, then I’d give it a go. I know it’s wrong to give an android top billing, but if it was mentioned first, I’d be more interested. Just me.
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