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After a land survey reveals that her fence is in the wrong place, a homeowner, unwilling to lose part of her backyard, wages war against her neighbor ? no matter what the law says.
I see the problem here. Maybe there should not be proof of law, and the act could have gone on unapproved at the time. That would give her two reasons to fight. How about: A generous neighbor replaces a downed fence when a homeowner is gone, but instead of following the original fence line, he angleRead more
I see the problem here. Maybe there should not be proof of law, and the act could have gone on unapproved at the time. That would give her two reasons to fight.
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A generous neighbor replaces a downed fence when a homeowner is gone, but instead of following the original fence line, he angles the new fence line to go around a tree, thus stealing inches of property from the homeowner – inches she wants back. A war is waged and the whole neighborhood will pay.
When an Animal Talent Agency has only 48 hours to find the right talent for a psychotic client or face demise, a flamboyant receptionist obsessed with making his dog a star sees an opportunity. He ?just? has to convince the mid divorce agent, win the client?s heart and train his pooch to overcome stage fright.
I've moved the problem to front - difficult movie star needs a dog. Then moved the hero's plan next. Then added the conflicts and time constraint. Also, this might just be me, but I tend to remove descriptive words that don't carry the story, like mid divorce agent - even if the boss being middle-agRead more
I’ve moved the problem to front – difficult movie star needs a dog. Then moved the hero’s plan next. Then added the conflicts and time constraint. Also, this might just be me, but I tend to remove descriptive words that don’t carry the story, like mid divorce agent – even if the boss being middle-aged and?divorced is a primary conflict for the hero, I still don’t think it’s strong enough reason to add in a logline. Last, I assume you mean gay when you say flamboyant which gay imho makes for a cleaner line.
When a difficult movie star needs a dog for a movie, the animal talent agency?s gay receptionist sees his chance to get his pooch into pictures, but he only has two days to convince his boss, win over the movie star, and train his shy pooch.
See lessAfter accepting the reality of being raped by a woman, a reformed demigod assassin tries to deal with his depression by getting back into the business of hunting people who bear the Chimera Mark.
Hi I think the story's goal and theme are revenge and justice. Who and how can be plugged in to support the goal and theme. A mythological assassin strikes back to right the wrongs of rape and injustice... This tells me he's a demigod and he's got some good reasons to pick up his assassin skills agaRead more
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I think the story’s goal and theme are revenge and justice. Who and how can be plugged in to support the goal and theme.
A mythological assassin strikes back to right the wrongs of rape and injustice…
This tells me he’s a demigod and he’s got some good reasons to pick up his assassin skills again. But it’s still not enough info. Maybe what’s missing is who is responsible for the injustice. You said a woman and a chimera mark. Is it an all women warrior civilization?
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