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The survival of the British Monarchy is at stake as Queen Elizabeth II struggles to deal with the death of Princess Diana, a woman she loathes but whom the public idolizes.
How is the British Monarchy?s "survival" threatened? Lawsuit? Popularity? What does ?deal with? mean? Publicity issues? I tried my hand at it but I removed some of the emotional impact?in yours. Ugh, I tried. Queen Elizabeth II scrupulously goes to battle with publicists and attorneys to defend theRead more
How is the British Monarchy?s “survival” threatened? Lawsuit? Popularity?
What does ?deal with? mean? Publicity issues? I tried my hand at it but I removed some of the emotional impact?in yours. Ugh, I tried.
Queen Elizabeth II scrupulously goes to battle with publicists and attorneys to defend the honor of the idolized princess she loathed, Princess Di, after her clandestine death.
See lessA struggling novelist on a deadline takes a job as a obituary writer while he gets over his ex-wife and the deaths he writes about expose truths in his own life.
Hi - I think this is well formed already, with a little tweak it'll be a thumbs up. This is a comedy so the obits are revealing something humorous but you say the "deaths he writes about expose truths in his own life." This is too vague. Are they truths? Or are they funny? Try giving an example of wRead more
Hi – I think this is well formed already, with a little tweak it’ll be a thumbs up.
See lessThis is a comedy so the obits are revealing something humorous but you say the “deaths he writes about expose truths in his own life.” This is too vague. Are they truths? Or are they funny? Try giving an example of what the truths are, especially if it’s the theme of the story (learns to laugh at oneself). I don’t think “on a deadline” is relevant since you couldn’t tell us the consequences of missing the deadline with any brevity.
Against a backdrop of growing religious conflict with a foreign civilization, an idealistic scientist seeks truth while a young civil servant seeks power.
I revised yours in an effort to fill in anything missing so I could see what else is missing and I think I agree, the thing missing is the so what. Here's my revision. When you get to the end (even with the made up details), you still ask, and what happened, so what. Can you provide that? When a MidRead more
I revised yours in an effort to fill in anything missing so I could see what else is missing and I think I agree, the thing missing is the so what.
See lessHere’s my revision. When you get to the end (even with the made up details), you still ask, and what happened, so what. Can you provide that?
When a Middle Eastern country is plunged into religious turbulence and war, two men seek a resolve. One, a scientist, finds anthropological reasons for the war while another, a civil servant, tries to solve the war by creating a new political s.ystem.