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  1. Posted: August 26, 2015In: Public

    After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.

    TabooCouple Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 29, 2015 at 3:44 am

    This ending sounds SO sad... :(

    This ending sounds SO sad… 🙁

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2015In: Public

    After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.

    TabooCouple Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 27, 2015 at 1:53 pm

    Rather, so as to add the kidney: A girl discovers she?s not related to her sister after she attempts to offer her a life-saving kidney. She goes on a journey to find her ?sister?s? real family for the kidney guided only by notes in their dead ?mother?s? diary? (41 words) Perhaps a bit wordy...(?) ThRead more

    Rather, so as to add the kidney:

    A girl discovers she?s not related to her sister after she attempts to offer her a life-saving kidney. She goes on a journey to find her ?sister?s? real family for the kidney guided only by notes in their dead ?mother?s? diary? (41 words) Perhaps a bit wordy…(?)

    Think you can make this a great project – touched even reading it 🙂

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2015In: Public

    After offering a kidney to her sister they discover they were both adopted. They go on a search for family and a kidney based only on their Mum’s old diary.PS Adoptive parents are dead, can’t see how to fit that in.

    TabooCouple Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 27, 2015 at 1:49 pm

    Wait, are the 2 sisters related? If not, then the search will NOT be for "their" family... Just needs a bit of tweaking: "A girl discovers she's not related to her sister after she attempts to offer her a life-saving kidney. She goes on a journey to find her 'sister's' real family guided only by notRead more

    Wait, are the 2 sisters related? If not, then the search will NOT be for “their” family… Just needs a bit of tweaking:

    “A girl discovers she’s not related to her sister after she attempts to offer her a life-saving kidney. She goes on a journey to find her ‘sister’s’ real family guided only by notes in their dead ‘mother’s’ diary” (38 words)

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