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  1. Posted: November 3, 2012In: Public

    After being accused of murder, a naive woman must overcome fear and flee her sheltered world in search of the truth, only to discover she may be the worlds greatest assassin.

    TanyaH
    Added an answer on November 5, 2012 at 4:39 am

    I'm not sure i like the description of her character 'naive' I wonder if there is a better way to describe her. Is she a mother? What's her career? If she were a mum that would be cool. Lots to leave behind and also to fight for! After being accused of murder, a mother has no choice but to leave behRead more

    I’m not sure i like the description of her character ‘naive’ I wonder if there is a better way to describe her.
    Is she a mother? What’s her career? If she were a mum that would be cool. Lots to leave behind and also to fight for!

    After being accused of murder, a mother has no choice but to leave behind everything she knows in search of the truth, that she may be the greatest assassin in the world.

    A bit long but it makes her sound stronger. Hope this helps x

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