1. Posted: September 29, 2015In:

    Down on his luck and fed up with his life in general, a black male is stopped by police in search of a suspect that fits his description.

    Tim Aucoin Logliner

    Needs more story. Why was he stopped? What happened after or before being stopped? This sounds like the?catalyst for the actual story.

    Needs more story. Why was he stopped? What happened after or before being stopped? This sounds like the?catalyst for the actual story.

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  2. Posted: March 22, 2015In:

    “Spielberg’s and Tarantino’s internet bet: at home at Uwe Boll – concidered Hollywood’s worst movie maker – be the first that writes a killer logline under twenty words; or star in Boll’s next disaster movie.”

    Tim Aucoin Logliner

    First off you spelled considered wrong. And it's too wordy, doesn't flow well. Everyone knows Boll's films suck so you could probably take that part out. "Spielberg?s and Tarantino make a bet: write a killer logline under twenty words or star in Uwe Boll?s next disaster movie."

    First off you spelled considered wrong. And it’s too wordy, doesn’t flow well. Everyone knows Boll’s films suck so you could probably take that part out.

    “Spielberg?s and Tarantino make a bet: write a killer logline under twenty words or star in Uwe Boll?s next disaster movie.”

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  3. Posted: May 7, 2013In:

    A week before Christmas terrorists invade the North Pole and take Santa hostage, and the only cop that can save him hates Christmas more than Ebenezer Scrooge.

    Tim Aucoin Logliner

    Thanks for the feedback guys. Just to clarify: what I'm going for with this is a tongue-in-cheek, r-rated, over the top action-comedy. Not in any way a serious movie.

    Thanks for the feedback guys. Just to clarify: what I’m going for with this is a tongue-in-cheek, r-rated, over the top action-comedy. Not in any way a serious movie.

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