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When a young man comes across a computer pop-up ad that informs him he will be killed in 3 days, he must do what he can to save himself.
As Richiev said, it's hard to see how someone would change their life around a pop-up ad. I'd like to add that the ad itself needs to do something cinematic, ie we need to see how it serves a danger to the main character. Maybe others have read the ad and died in 3 days (kind of like The Ring but foRead more
As Richiev said, it’s hard to see how someone would change their life around a pop-up ad.
I’d like to add that the ad itself needs to do something cinematic, ie we need to see how it serves a danger to the main character. Maybe others have read the ad and died in 3 days (kind of like The Ring but for the internet).
Also “young” doesn’t really describe the main character as that is a term that is open to suggestion.
A 60 year old would see a 40 year old as young for example.
See lessAfter finding photographs of them taken while they slept, a honeymooning couple must uncover the truth behind the photographer’s identity hidden in the portraits of previous guests of the holiday home before they become just another picture on the wall.
It's not clear as to who the main character is, but the bigger issue is the why? Why do they have to "uncover the truth behind the photographer?s identity"? Why don't they call the police? Why don't they leave the holiday home? How do they know that the photos of the previous couples means that theyRead more
It’s not clear as to who the main character is, but the bigger issue is the why?
Why do they have to “uncover the truth behind the photographer?s identity”?
Why don’t they call the police? Why don’t they leave the holiday home? How do they know that the photos of the previous couples means that they will die? Is it supernatural?
See lessAfter the high school bullies reduce the sweet librarian to tears, a popular kid with a bright future risks expulsion to lead an alliance of seven uniquely skilled students to make sure the bullies get kicked out first.
I can imagine the satirical "reimagining of Seven Samurai / The Magnificent Seven" set in a high school, however I feel that the main protagonist being "the coolest kid in school" doesn't quite sell the stakes to me. Are these bullies the cool kids friends? Are they taking a risk by destroying thatRead more
I can imagine the satirical “reimagining of Seven Samurai / The Magnificent Seven” set in a high school, however I feel that the main protagonist being “the coolest kid in school” doesn’t quite sell the stakes to me.
Are these bullies the cool kids friends? Are they taking a risk by destroying that friendship as well? Will they risk their popularity in doing so?
The risk of expulsion works better for an honor role student or a “nerdy” student instead, since the perception of “cool kids” tends to be that they don’t care for things like that and tend to be laid back.
The most interesting concepts usually involve a character with a unique flaw that will challenge him/her both in achieving the external goal and internal need. It makes us wonder “will the hero achieve their goal?”
Anyway just my thoughts, I will elaborate if needed or if anything comes to mind.
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