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A police officer kills a powerful alien, and many Earthlings are infested by another. The second alien leader and the officer’s future-timeline son hold grudges against the cop for murdering their dear ones.
Agreed with what Robb Ross said. Some things in this logline are not very clear. What is the inciting incident? Clearly the police officer killing the alien isn't. Also when you say many earthlings are infested by another? Do you mean that they are infested by the same alien? It controls multiple peRead more
Agreed with what Robb Ross said.
Some things in this logline are not very clear. What is the inciting incident? Clearly the police officer killing the alien isn’t. Also when you say many earthlings are infested by another? Do you mean that they are infested by the same alien? It controls multiple people?
Also “holding a grudge” against the cop for killing their loved ones isn’t a cinematic goal that our lead (the cops son?) will strive for. What does your protagonist do for the 2nd and 3rd act of the film? Or is this a series?
See lessA police officer kills a powerful alien, and many Earthlings are infested by another. The second alien leader and the officer’s future-timeline son hold grudges against the cop for murdering their dear ones.
Agreed with what Robb Ross said. Some things in this logline are not very clear. What is the inciting incident? Clearly the police officer killing the alien isn't. Also when you say many earthlings are infested by another? Do you mean that they are infested by the same alien? It controls multiple peRead more
Agreed with what Robb Ross said.
Some things in this logline are not very clear. What is the inciting incident? Clearly the police officer killing the alien isn’t. Also when you say many earthlings are infested by another? Do you mean that they are infested by the same alien? It controls multiple people?
Also “holding a grudge” against the cop for killing their loved ones isn’t a cinematic goal that our lead (the cops son?) will strive for. What does your protagonist do for the 2nd and 3rd act of the film? Or is this a series?
See lessSet in the year 1693: When they flee the Salem witch trials and end up in the land of the Wendigo, a naive Witch must use the dangerous power of the Black Flame in order to protect her and her sisters from the ferocious demon.
Looking for advice on how to streamline the logline and strip it to the bare and important elements.
Looking for advice on how to streamline the logline and strip it to the bare and important elements.
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