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After her kitten was kidnapped, a girl must team up with her friends to track down the thief by invading his home.
Hi IvyEight6, I’ll give this a go. After a family kitten gets kidnapped, a detective has seven days to figure out the motive of the suspect or else force the police chief to end the investigation. Intention: seven days to figure out the motive of the suspect or else force the police chief to end theRead more
Hi IvyEight6,
I’ll give this a go.
After a family kitten gets kidnapped, a detective has seven days to figure out the motive of the suspect or else force the police chief to end the investigation.
Intention: seven days to figure out the motive of the suspect or else force the police chief to end the investigation. (It’s certainly very clear)
Obstacle: seven days/ticking clock.
After his daughter’s kitten is kidnapped, a widowed detective has seven days to find her, before the police chief is forced to end the investigation.
– The thing with this. I mean – the detective could do it in his spare time, right? He has the skills.
Anyways – I thought I’d enhance the drama a bit more. Perhaps he could be a widow. It’s his daughter’s kitten. Perhaps the kitten is the one thing they have in common? So yeah – it’s as much about the detective and daughter bond – them getting closer through the investigation and beginning to see eye to eye.
Hope this gets the ball rolling.
Good luck!
(Also – Catnap – great title.)
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Hmm.. I like the "reviewed at the end of the month" as it adds a ticking clock (great for loglines). It also gives her a very specific goal. It's good to make sure everything is on the line and the stakes are high. Make sure her restaurant closes down/she loses her job or something if she doesn't coRead more
Hmm.. I like the “reviewed at the end of the month” as it adds a ticking clock (great for loglines). It also gives her a very specific goal. It’s good to make sure everything is on the line and the stakes are high. Make sure her restaurant closes down/she loses her job or something if she doesn’t come up with the star-worthy dish.
You probably don’t need “even if her methods aren’t entirely legal” – not for the logline.
So that’s…
Intention: must create Michelin star-worthy dish.
Obstacles: ? ex-fiance (who we innately think must be creep and will stop at nothing because he steals signature dishes.)
When her successful restauranteur ex-fiance steals her signature dish, a struggling chef must create a new Michelin star-worthy dish before both restaurants are reviewed at the end of the month.
“Loses her catering job” and “young” are fine for the plot/outline but not sure about for the logline. “Struggling” should suffice.
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A young cadet surveyor of planets fights an evil force that has infiltrated the League of celestial nations for the purpose of extracting and transferring the life force of people to their own dying population. Intention: must fight an evil force that has infiltrated the League of celestial nationsRead more
A young cadet surveyor of planets fights an evil force that has infiltrated the League of celestial nations for the purpose of extracting and transferring the life force of people to their own dying population.
Intention: must fight an evil force that has infiltrated the League of celestial nations for the purpose of extracting and transferring the life force of people to their own dying population (quite a mouthful).
Obstacle: ?
A young cadet surveyor of planets must stop an evil (alien) force threatening to deplete planet Earth.
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