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Trapped in a mansion filled with vampires and their human cattle, an amnesia-ridden detective must figure out how he got there, how to get out – and who to trust.
Hi Lempicka - I agree. I think with "amnesia-ridden" it's suggested he'll need to figure how he got there - so perhaps not necessarily for the logline. Trapped in a mansion filled with vampires and their human cattle, an amnesia-ridden detective must figure out how to get out ? and who to trust. I'lRead more
Hi Lempicka – I agree.
I think with “amnesia-ridden” it’s suggested he’ll need to figure how he got there – so perhaps not necessarily for the logline.
Trapped in a mansion filled with vampires and their human cattle, an amnesia-ridden detective must figure out how to get out ? and who to trust.
I’ll work on this.
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To make it leaner I could technically cut... "before the town's mass hysteria reaches boiling point".
To make it leaner I could technically cut…
“before the town’s mass hysteria reaches boiling point”.
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Cool - as long as the concept is solid. (This is more a logline for me and the first draft as opposed to the marketing logline which will probably look different and hopefully leaner.) Without giving anything away - that's basically what happens MP. (Think what happens in "Psycho".)
Cool – as long as the concept is solid.
(This is more a logline for me and the first draft as opposed to the marketing logline which will probably look different and hopefully leaner.)
Without giving anything away – that’s basically what happens MP. (Think what happens in “Psycho”.)
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