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Searching for a missing girl, two detectives become trapped in a manor filled with a secret society of vampires – and must get out before eaten alive.
I think you're right with the original logline. They wouldn't just go to a vampire's house. That's a twist. He kills one of the detectives (hopefully a big name actor. someone you wouldn't expect.) He then skins him. Cooks him. Serves him to his friend - who is drugged or incapacitated. The villainRead more
I think you’re right with the original logline. They wouldn’t just go to a vampire’s house.
That’s a twist. He kills one of the detectives (hopefully a big name actor. someone you wouldn’t expect.)
He then skins him. Cooks him. Serves him to his friend – who is drugged or incapacitated.
The villain is a Southern Gentleman – he is wining and dining him first. Then he’ll kill him.
It’s like with IT – why doesn’t the clown just kill them? Well, he’s feeding off their fear. I might lean into a weird sexual thing. Maybe this vampire aristocrat literally gets off on seeing this guy’s fear/dread, etc.
Have you seen the end of BONE TOMAHAWK? If I can replicate that ending ha.
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Hi Mike.I'll give this a shot...When rival crews try to rob the same bank at the same time, a crew-leader struggles to remain morally decent and get out with the money and his life."struggles to keep the peace, protect the hostages, not get arrested" -I like all this but there must be some way to enRead more
Hi Mike.
I’ll give this a shot…
When rival crews try to rob the same bank at the same time, a crew-leader struggles to remain morally decent and get out with the money and his life.
“struggles to keep the peace, protect the hostages, not get arrested” –
I like all this but there must be some way to encapsulate it all a lot quicker. Reading this as an exec, I think only one of those things will latch on.
I also cut ” the old-fashioned”. He is defined by what he does.?
Character is behaviour, right? What he does is who he is.
And what he is -? is a man trying to do the right things but still have his cake and eat it.
But yeah – sounds cool.
See lessSearching for a missing girl, two detectives become trapped in a manor filled with a secret society of vampires – and must get out before eaten alive.
That last one still feels quite fat though. Needs to be leaned out... Investigating several brutal murders, two detectives become trapped in the manor of who turns out to be a leader of a secret society of vampires - and must get out before they are eaten.
That last one still feels quite fat though. Needs to be leaned out…
Investigating several brutal murders, two detectives become trapped in the manor of who turns out to be a leader of a secret society of vampires – and must get out before they are eaten.
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