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A con artist spends Christmas with a family he grows to love, but his masquerade is threatened when his ex wife moves in next door.
Perhaps it's better like this...A con artist spends Christmas with a family he grows to love, but his masquerade is threatened when he finds out his real family lives next door."Moves in" is doing too much I think.Also, I kept in masquerade (it's doing double time here) so you know he's hustled themRead more
Perhaps it’s better like this…
A con artist spends Christmas with a family he grows to love, but his masquerade is threatened when he finds out his real family lives next door.
“Moves in” is doing too much I think.
Also, I kept in masquerade (it’s doing double time here) so you know he’s hustled them or ya’ know seduced them into it. He is pretending to be someone else but I don’t have time to put it in there.
See lessA con artist spends Christmas with a family he grows to love, but his masquerade is threatened when his ex wife moves in next door.
This is the one I'm considering going with: A lone wolf con artist seduces a woman by pretending to be someone else, but must first spend Christmas with her family, whom he grows to love. It's simple and basically the film. But I want to lean in on the conflict. Regardless, I think his ex-wife and dRead more
This is the one I’m considering going with:
A lone wolf con artist seduces a woman by pretending to be someone else, but must first spend Christmas with her family, whom he grows to love.
It’s simple and basically the film. But I want to lean in on the conflict. Regardless, I think his ex-wife and daughter are definitely a complication to deal with. His real life bleeding into the false one (that he wishes was real).
Not only that, I thought the setup/opening hook we’ve got him trying to call his estranged ex-wife and daughter – who don’t want to talk to him.
This leads him to seducing a woman (and basically her family) and getting invited to spend the holidays with them.
See lessA con artist spends Christmas with a family he grows to love, but his masquerade is threatened when his ex wife moves in next door.
Any ideas with this or should I stick with the original?
Any ideas with this or should I stick with the original?
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