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A good cop working as a mole to bring down a mobster and a corrupt cop working as a mole for the mobster struggle to unmask each other.
How about...A cop working as a mole to bring down a mobster and a cop working as a mole for the mobster struggle to unmask each other.- Aren't they revealed more by what they're doing? So you potentially don't need "good" and "corrupt".(Though they do add colour and help paint the picture.)Yours isRead more
How about…
A cop working as a mole to bring down a mobster and a cop working as a mole for the mobster struggle to unmask each other.
– Aren’t they revealed more by what they’re doing? So you potentially don’t need “good” and “corrupt”.
(Though they do add colour and help paint the picture.)
Yours is better though.?
Just playing around.
See lessA wheelchair bound girl and her friends fend off zombies, whilst visiting a cabin when she discovers her friends murdered them ? and she was next.
Carved down even more... A wheelchair bound student and her friends fend off zombies, whilst trapped in a cabin, but soon discovers her friends murdered them ? and she was next. Is that 26 words? Anyways - it's a cool concept. Good luck with it!
Carved down even more…
A wheelchair bound student and her friends fend off zombies, whilst trapped in a cabin, but soon discovers her friends murdered them ? and she was next.
Is that 26 words?
Anyways – it’s a cool concept. Good luck with it!
See lessA wheelchair bound girl and her friends fend off zombies, whilst visiting a cabin when she discovers her friends murdered them ? and she was next.
Hi MikeI think it's innate that these female zombies who were murdered are seeking revenge. I don't think you need to mention it.The twist that our heroine was going to be murdered next works.You could potentially use the one above to write your thing.But you will need a leaner, tighter one to markeRead more
Hi Mike
I think it’s innate that these female zombies who were murdered are seeking revenge. I don’t think you need to mention it.
The twist that our heroine was going to be murdered next works.
You could potentially use the one above to write your thing.
But you will need a leaner, tighter one to market it.
A wheelchair bound student and her male friends fend off female zombies, whilst trapped in a cabin, but soon discovers her friends murdered them ? and were planning to kill her next.
(A variation of the other one I did ha.)
That’s 30 words? I’ve kept in “male” and “female” for now. I’m not sure how much it’s needed.
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