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  1. Posted: October 20, 2019In: Drama

    A young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 8, 2019 at 10:56 pm

    A young man, desperately numb, sets out to fix the world?s problems ? in order to feel something again. (18 words I think? Nice and lean.)

    A young man, desperately numb, sets out to fix the world?s problems ? in order to feel something again.

    (18 words I think? Nice and lean.)

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  2. Posted: October 20, 2019In: Drama

    A young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 8, 2019 at 10:46 pm

    I'm wondering if the marijuana is even necessary in the logline? Perhaps just... A cynical teen, unable to live life to its fullest because of the world's problems - sets out to fix them. Tell me what you think?  

    I’m wondering if the marijuana is even necessary in the logline?

    Perhaps just…

    A cynical teen, unable to live life to its fullest because of the world’s problems – sets out to fix them.

    Tell me what you think?

     

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  3. Posted: October 20, 2019In: Drama

    A young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 8, 2019 at 10:45 pm

    A cynical teen, unable to enjoy his marijuana fix because of the world's problems, sets out to fix them. INTENTION: In order to live life to its fullest (and enjoy his marijuana) he must fix the world's problems. OBSTACLES: The world's problems.

    A cynical teen, unable to enjoy his marijuana fix because of the world’s problems, sets out to fix them.

    INTENTION: In order to live life to its fullest (and enjoy his marijuana) he must fix the world’s problems.

    OBSTACLES: The world’s problems.

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