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A young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.
"Without intention and obstacle - it's journalism." - I stole that from Aaron Sorkin. Lets give him a strong intention and strong obstacle... A cynical teen sets out to smoke marijuana nonstop for a decade, antagonising his parents - who are both anti-drug politicians.
“Without intention and obstacle – it’s journalism.” – I stole that from Aaron Sorkin.
Lets give him a strong intention and strong obstacle…
A cynical teen sets out to smoke marijuana nonstop for a decade, antagonising his parents – who are both anti-drug politicians.
A generous, funny, and charming young man now has thousands of clones who all act like him, except they have orders from their creators to bring terror to those they ensnare in a romantic relationship.
Next try...A man clones himself in order to fund his wedding, however, the clones begin to terrorise those they ensnare romantically - including his fiancee.I got rid of the affable and young parts. Not really needed. He can be young in the screenplay.
Next try…
A man clones himself in order to fund his wedding, however, the clones begin to terrorise those they ensnare romantically – including his fiancee.
I got rid of the affable and young parts. Not really needed. He can be young in the screenplay.
See lessA generous, funny, and charming young man now has thousands of clones who all act like him, except they have orders from their creators to bring terror to those they ensnare in a romantic relationship.
When an affable young man is cloned thousands of times, their creators bring terror to those they entrap romantically.- Carved down to its essence.Inciting incident - his cloning.This needs a "And" or a "But"."And now he has to stop them" or something.We need stakes too... Perhaps affable young manRead more
When an affable young man is cloned thousands of times, their creators bring terror to those they entrap romantically.
– Carved down to its essence.
Inciting incident – his cloning.
This needs a “And” or a “But”.
“And now he has to stop them” or something.
We need stakes too… Perhaps affable young man is getting married? Perhaps he discovers he’s been unknowingly cloned?
He wakes up one morning and sees several clones walking around. – that would be a good opening hook.
“That guy looks exactly like me?… That guy too… What the hell?”
Young part aside I imagined Paul Rudd in the lead. Don’t know why.
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