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When a charming con artist settles down with a sweet yet gullible woman, he must spend Christmas with her dysfunctional family – and unexpectedly experiences the concept of family for the first time.
Very long version: (yeah I'm gonna try to get this to under 25 words. Still playing around with it.) Trapped in his old home town during a snowstorm, a charming con artist settles down with a sweet yet gullible woman for the holidays, but must spend Christmas with her dysfunctional family - and unexRead more
Very long version: (yeah I’m gonna try to get this to under 25 words. Still playing around with it.)
Trapped in his old home town during a snowstorm, a charming con artist settles down with a sweet yet gullible woman for the holidays, but must spend Christmas with her dysfunctional family – and unexpectedly falls in love with the family.
See lessWhen a charming con artist settles down with a sweet yet gullible woman, he must spend Christmas with her dysfunctional family – and unexpectedly experiences the concept of family for the first time.
I hope the conflict is innate here. Clearly he'll have to unmask himself. Clearly he falls for the family. Not so clearly he begins as a Scrooge-like figure and softens up. Longer version: - why he can't escape... Trapped in a small town because of snow storm, a charming con artist settles down withRead more
I hope the conflict is innate here. Clearly he’ll have to unmask himself. Clearly he falls for the family. Not so clearly he begins as a Scrooge-like figure and softens up.
Longer version: – why he can’t escape…
Trapped in a small town because of snow storm, a charming con artist settles down with a sweet, wholesome woman and her family for the holidays – and unexpectedly?finds his first chance to have a real family.
I think it’s too much to make the sweet wholesome woman a mark. I think it’s likely he’s trapped and she takes him in and they slowly fall for each other. Yet he’s still pretending to be someone else.
(I think as a con artist, he’s more of a loner. He’s spent his whole life cutting off any emotional ties/attachments, etc. He’s less of a predator and more a Frank Abagnale figure. Came from a broken home. Always running. Yet eventually winds up back in his home town.)
It’s sentimental – because it’s his old home town. There’s some scars here. Perhaps he finds his old house? Perhaps revisits the place where he first became a con artist or where he was made into one?
Stakes: he could lose a family he grows to love and who grows to love him.
Conflict: he’s essentially lying to everyone.
What do you think?
I’ll probably need a few hours to shave off some words I think. There’s potentially something here.
(This is when you tell me it’s already a Hallmark film ha.)
See lessTwo sworn enemies become trapped in an isolated house, fighting off violent locals, after one of them is accused of a hit and run.
24 words I think. The must (the goal) is there - to stay alive or die. The stakes are clear - again, to stay alive. The inciting incident is here. I want to do something about how one act of violence leads to another. Hopefully "after one of them is accused of a hit and run" is enough. Reminds me ofRead more
24 words I think.
The must (the goal) is there – to stay alive or die.
The stakes are clear – again, to stay alive.
The inciting incident is here.
I want to do something about how one act of violence leads to another. Hopefully “after one of them is accused of a hit and run” is enough. Reminds me of First Blood.
I’m keeping it mysterious why these guys are enemies – and trying to keep it lean.
I’m leading with “two sworn enemies” and leaving the I.I. for the end. Reads better.
“Two sworn enemies” keeps them mysterious. I think the fact they’re enemies or there’s friction – suggests at any moment one might betray the other or give up the other.
I dunno – this is the most deliberately opaque this idea has got thus far ha. It’s lean though.
I got rid of some of the specificity (“man who accidentally killed his wife”) to keep it lean. Put back “isolated” to help paint the picture.
What do you think?
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