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  1. Posted: December 11, 2012In: Public

    Gifted with powers after an alien ship crash lands in their hometown, five high school freshmen struggle to deal with homework, football games and staying a step ahead of the military who want to use their powers to benefit them while trying to discover the mysteries behind the crash.

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    Added an answer on December 12, 2012 at 1:28 pm

    Rewrite: Tired of doing what adults can?t, five teens amp up their abilities in an effort to defend the last city not under hostile alien control. Their power may not be enough when they go up against the alien?s top warriors. Question: How do movie loglines differ from TV Shows?

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    Tired of doing what adults can?t, five teens amp up their abilities in an effort to defend the last city not under hostile alien control. Their power may not be enough when they go up against the alien?s top warriors.

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    How do movie loglines differ from TV Shows?

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  2. Posted: December 11, 2012In: Public

    Gifted with powers after an alien ship crash lands in their hometown, five high school freshmen struggle to deal with homework, football games and staying a step ahead of the military who want to use their powers to benefit them while trying to discover the mysteries behind the crash.

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2012 at 12:08 pm

    This is one of the reasons I'm glad I found this site. I have been working on this script for a while and it hasn't come together and I think this may be why. Back to the drawing board.

    This is one of the reasons I’m glad I found this site. I have been working on this script for a while and it hasn’t come together and I think this may be why. Back to the drawing board.

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  3. Posted: December 11, 2012In: Public

    Not finding any success in the self help and fitness books, a guy goes into a magical store and is given a remedy that works but comes with challenges and side effects that he wasn?t prepared to confront.

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2012 at 12:03 pm

    Thanks for the tip. Let me rewrite this one based on your feedback.

    Thanks for the tip. Let me rewrite this one based on your feedback.

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