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Tired of being told she doesn't take risks, a nerdy college student creates a math problem and proclaims she'll go on a date with the first student that solves it.
Feels like you are on the right track. With Zach's suggestion the logline does seem to flow and work better, but it still feels like it is missing something. I noticed your title is Emily and the Dragon. Perhaps we should get a feel for the dragon in the Logline. What happens when someone solves it?Read more
Feels like you are on the right track. With Zach’s suggestion the logline does seem to flow and work better, but it still feels like it is missing something. I noticed your title is Emily and the Dragon. Perhaps we should get a feel for the dragon in the Logline. What happens when someone solves it? Is it the person she wanted or someone she least expected?
See lessCorporal Brandon Goldstein returns home from Vietnam after a 22 – month deployment, seeking answers why his home and family are gone and nobody recognizes him.
I like the premise of this one. It feels like there is some good story potential there. I think you should keep it general and not give the character's name. Let the reader of the logline fill in their own impression of the character. For example: A vietnam veteran returns home to find his home andRead more
I like the premise of this one. It feels like there is some good story potential there. I think you should keep it general and not give the character’s name. Let the reader of the logline fill in their own impression of the character.
For example: A vietnam veteran returns home to find his home and family are gone.
Also, maybe provide a timeline on him. Perhaps the character is home only on a week pass and he has to find the answers to his question before he is required to return.
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