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Posted: 2012-12-11T07:09:42+10:00 In:

Tired of being told she doesn't take risks, a nerdy college student creates a math problem and proclaims she'll go on a date with the first student that solves it.

Emily and the Dragon

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    1. “… the first student WHO solves it.”

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    2. A rewrote your logline, I’m not saying it’s better, but at least it’s not filled with grammatical errors.

      A humdrum college student is constantly being told she doesn’t take enough risks, so she creates a math problem and proclaims the first person who solves it will be her next date.

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    3. I*

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    4. Feels like you are on the right track. With Zach’s suggestion the logline does seem to flow and work better, but it still feels like it is missing something. I noticed your title is Emily and the Dragon. Perhaps we should get a feel for the dragon in the Logline. What happens when someone solves it? Is it the person she wanted or someone she least expected?

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