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  1. Posted: January 21, 2013In: Public

    A rebellious teenage girl and her brother discover a time-traveling chaise lounge in their Grandmother's attic- trapped in the past and facing King Tut's wrath, they find help from an unlikely source- their teenage Grandmother in 1956.

    throwitfar
    Added an answer on January 21, 2013 at 2:49 am

    I have modified the last section to bring the irony full circle: "their rebellious teenage Grandmother in 1956."

    I have modified the last section to bring the irony full circle: “their rebellious teenage Grandmother in 1956.”

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  2. Posted: January 10, 2013In: Public

    A teenager girl, forced on a family trip to visit her eccentric Grandmother, becomes an unwitting time traveler after discovering a magical chaise lounge in the attic- trapped in the past, she must seek help from an unlikely source- her 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956.

    throwitfar
    Added an answer on January 10, 2013 at 3:09 pm

    I'll add this, they aren't "stuck in 1956" but rather stuck traveling through time without being able to get "home." They move through time on a magical chaise lounge by reading history books... Ultimately, they choose, by accident it seems, (more of a plan unknown to them) to travel to 1956 in a ruRead more

    I’ll add this, they aren’t “stuck in 1956” but rather stuck traveling through time without being able to get “home.” They move through time on a magical chaise lounge by reading history books… Ultimately, they choose, by accident it seems, (more of a plan unknown to them) to travel to 1956 in a rush to get away from King Tut…

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  3. Posted: January 10, 2013In: Public

    A teenager girl, forced on a family trip to visit her eccentric Grandmother, becomes an unwitting time traveler after discovering a magical chaise lounge in the attic- trapped in the past, she must seek help from an unlikely source- her 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956.

    throwitfar
    Added an answer on January 10, 2013 at 12:01 pm

    A revision...? Siblings become unwitting time travelers after discovering a magical chaise lounge in their eccentric Grandmother's attic- trapped in the past- they must seek help from an unlikely source- their 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956. Technically a brother and sister do these things togethRead more

    A revision…?

    Siblings become unwitting time travelers after discovering a magical chaise lounge in their eccentric Grandmother’s attic- trapped in the past- they must seek help from an unlikely source- their 14 year-old Grandmother from 1956.

    Technically a brother and sister do these things together, although the character that grows and changes is the girl. Does the shortened, and less character specific, Logline work better?

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