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  1. Posted: January 10, 2013In: Public

    With the unwanted help of a little girl in his building, a reclusive retired man with OCD tries to figure out which one of his neighbors keeps dropping cigarette butts onto the patio of his New York city apartment.

    throwitfar
    Added an answer on January 10, 2013 at 11:51 am

    Cutting, try something along these lines... With unwanted help from a neighbor girl, a reclusive man with OCD struggles to discover which of his neighbors keeps dropping cigarette butts onto the patio of his New York city apartment. I got it to 32, Great concept man!

    Cutting, try something along these lines…

    With unwanted help from a neighbor girl, a reclusive man with OCD struggles to discover which of his neighbors keeps dropping cigarette butts onto the patio of his New York city apartment.

    I got it to 32, Great concept man!

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  2. Posted: January 10, 2013In: Public

    On the verge of being alone for the rest of his life, a lazy man falls in love with a miniature woman who lives in the small model city that he finds in the spare bedroom of his new apartment, but when he can't figure out a way to shrink himself to her size he must push himself to his limits to find a way in, before he loses the girl of his dreams.

    throwitfar
    Added an answer on January 10, 2013 at 11:44 am

    I agree about the start by Richiev: "" That just POPS. I had a lot written, but here's the key thoughts from me, try this: "A lonely man falls in love with a miniature woman he discovers living in a model city in his spare room- unable to shrink himself and running out of time- he finds himself searRead more

    I agree about the start by Richiev: “” That just POPS.

    I had a lot written, but here’s the key thoughts from me, try this:

    “A lonely man falls in love with a miniature woman he discovers living in a model city in his spare room- unable to shrink himself and running out of time- he finds himself searching desperately for a way into the city, and her heart.

    This would be a fun read! Hope I helped, even a little!

    Best of luck!

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  3. Posted: January 3, 2013In: Public

    With dreams of writing the next great American novel, a struggling author blackmails a middle-aged hitman for inspiration.

    throwitfar
    Added an answer on January 4, 2013 at 3:42 am

    What I was looking for in this briefest of brief logline was a tweetable # of characters that would entice the recipient into wanting MORE! :-)

    What I was looking for in this briefest of brief logline was a tweetable # of characters that would entice the recipient into wanting MORE! 🙂

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