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Ed Noble?s world falls apart when a suicide bomber murders his family. Holding the bomber?s spiritual leader responsible, Ed resorts to desperate measures to bring him to account.
Hey patrochable - thx for the logline idea - it is summarised very well. The complication (to date) is the spiritual leader is offshore and in the script (to date) the protagonist has been deported from Indonesia for threatening to kill the leader....but the logline you suggest gives me a stronger dRead more
Hey patrochable – thx for the logline idea – it is summarised very well. The complication (to date) is the spiritual leader is offshore and in the script (to date) the protagonist has been deported from Indonesia for threatening to kill the leader….but the logline you suggest gives me a stronger direction than I had – so thx for that..
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Interesting thoughts Chris, thx. As with earlier comments, the move is mainly thriller with revenge as a theme rather than its core theme. Its more about understanding and justice. in regards the antagonist they always say villains don't know they are villains, and in the script there is a tape of tRead more
Interesting thoughts Chris, thx. As with earlier comments, the move is mainly thriller with revenge as a theme rather than its core theme. Its more about understanding and justice. in regards the antagonist they always say villains don’t know they are villains, and in the script there is a tape of the spiritual leader’s ramblings that was inadmissible in court and suppressed. My protagonist has a copy and wants to expose it. As for shortening – you’re right. thx again..
See lessEd Noble?s world falls apart when a suicide bomber murders his family. Holding the bomber?s spiritual leader responsible, Ed resorts to desperate measures to bring him to account.
You're right saving people from further hardship does give more resonance to the issue of revenge. I guess my protagonist does want revenge at some level but what he needs is more an understanding, to bring someone to justice, but more importantly he is trying to deal with loss. In the script he hasRead more
You’re right saving people from further hardship does give more resonance to the issue of revenge. I guess my protagonist does want revenge at some level but what he needs is more an understanding, to bring someone to justice, but more importantly he is trying to deal with loss. In the script he has tried to confront the spiritual leader on a number of occasions. He has been blanked every time. I am trying to walk a fine balance …..ths for the useful feedback it has helped me shape the direction of the logline further.
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