1. Posted: January 22, 2021In:

    A socially disconnected bartender makes a connection with the odd new beer deliver guy. He struggles to develop his new friendship as his old stuck-up friends hold him back.

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    Great boil down, thanks!!!

    Great boil down, thanks!!!

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  2. Posted: January 21, 2021In:

    An argument between two friends brings about the end of their relationship.

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    Too vague, add more details i.e main character's flaw and what the argument is about

    Too vague, add more details i.e main character’s flaw and what the argument is about

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2020In:

    A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.

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    thanks for all the feedback, really appreciate it:)!

    thanks for all the feedback, really appreciate it:)!

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