1. Posted: February 24, 2020In:

    After a heart attack on his highschool graduation, an obese mama’s boy sets off to lose a hundred pounds before starting college, in the hopes of getting laid and avoiding an early grave.

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    UPDATED LOGLINE After suffering a heart attack, a mama?s boy sets off to lose a hundred pounds before getting into college in order to save his life and pursue girls.

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    After suffering a heart attack, a mama?s boy sets off to lose a hundred pounds before getting into college in order to save his life and pursue girls.

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2020In:

    A pizza delivery driver that resents Superheroes, is inadvertently stuck protecting one when the worlds greatest supervillain arrives in his city during a typical afternoon shift.

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    I'd study "The Boys" the TV show to make sure your premise isn't too similar to it. It's also a guy who hates superheroes because they accidentaly killed his girlfirend, and in the end he grows a connection with one of them despite it.

    I’d study “The Boys” the TV show to make sure your premise isn’t too similar to it. It’s also a guy who hates superheroes because they accidentaly killed his girlfirend, and in the end he grows a connection with one of them despite it.

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  3. Posted: February 24, 2020In:

    While shooting their first music video, a local metal band on the rise quickly realizes that the urban legend surrounding their filming location is true: When people enter, they don?t exit.

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    agree with all of the above. I think this premise has some potential as there's alot of dynamics between band members to explore.

    agree with all of the above. I think this premise has some potential as there’s alot of dynamics between band members to explore.

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