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  1. Posted: September 28, 2020In: Coming of Age

    A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.

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    Replied to answer on September 30, 2020 at 2:14 am

    It's the friend's mom that has got cancer, not the friend. The objective would be to provide emotional support for his friend but the obstacle is his own inner resistance to show affection. Perhaps it's all too internal?

    It’s the friend’s mom that has got cancer, not the friend.
    The objective would be to provide emotional support for his friend but the obstacle is his own inner resistance to show affection.

    Perhaps it’s all too internal?

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2020In: Coming of Age

    A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.

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    Replied to answer on September 29, 2020 at 9:25 pm

    A witty young man fears showing affection, but when his old friend reveals his mom has got cancer, he must face his fear. is this more specific? I'm struggling with the last bit, what he must do in order to solve the problem. I have to pitch it to a panel at film school and it's required to be underRead more

    A witty young man fears showing affection, but when his old friend reveals his mom has got cancer, he must face his fear.

    is this more specific?
    I’m struggling with the last bit, what he must do in order to solve the problem. I have to pitch it to a panel at film school and it’s required to be under 25 words.

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2020In: Coming of Age

    A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.

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    Replied to answer on September 29, 2020 at 8:48 pm

    Ah, I see how it really requires to be more specific. Thanks:)

    Ah, I see how it really requires to be more specific. Thanks:)

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