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A man planning to commit suicide becomes the soul survivor of a commercial jet airline crash plus the investigations number one suspect as a terrorist involved in bringing the flight down but most importantly he is reborn, discovering the things in life he previously thought of no value: love, empathy & revolution.
Heya, I can see what you're trying to do, with an outer and an inner journey. My comment is that I'm not precisely sure of the genre. I.e. Is it mostly psychological/courtroom/police procedural... or is it lots of guns and ammo and action? Also, Is the Agent someone with a brain, like Tommy-Lee JoneRead more
Heya, I can see what you’re trying to do, with an outer and an inner journey. My comment is that I’m not precisely sure of the genre. I.e.
Is it mostly psychological/courtroom/police procedural… or is it lots of guns and ammo and action? Also, Is the Agent someone with a brain, like Tommy-Lee Jones in The Fugitive, or a hard-ass with a shotgun and dubious ethics?
Is he a “Detective” or a Manhunter?
Is the protagonist in the courts / prison trying to fight a death sentence, or is he a man on the run?
Should be easy to clarify all this in the logline. I think I get an idea from the posted comments.
See lessA man runs from a stranger though a narrow alleyway out in front of a car, but then suddenly he is the stranger seeing himself enter the same alleyway, can he prevent his own accident?
I think most of the elements are there. I'm left wondering who the "bad guys" are. Also, what are the stakes? Does he witness his own death? Overall pretty close.
I think most of the elements are there. I’m left wondering who the “bad guys” are. Also, what are the stakes? Does he witness his own death? Overall pretty close.
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