1. Posted: November 11, 2012In:

    An idealistic priest is hunted by Church agents after he uncovers a plot to release a virus that targets non believers.

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    Consider the word "Idealistic". To me, this sounds like a normal attribute of a priest rather than a fatal flaw. I'd swap it for something describing a stronger flaw, or a deeper or ironic flaw.

    Consider the word “Idealistic”. To me, this sounds like a normal attribute of a priest rather than a fatal flaw.
    I’d swap it for something describing a stronger flaw, or a deeper or ironic flaw.

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  2. Posted: November 9, 2012In:

    An unhinged loner masquerading in his late father?s police uniform investigates the apparent suicide of his only friend, a rookie Los Angeles cop with a dark secret. Can he walk the thin blue line?

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    Heya, I like the idea of a movie named "Fetish Cop"... but the concept of "Fetish" doesn't exactly come across in the logline. Interesting concept though.

    Heya,

    I like the idea of a movie named “Fetish Cop”… but the concept of “Fetish” doesn’t exactly come across in the logline.

    Interesting concept though.

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  3. Posted: November 8, 2012In:

    Mick is placed in charge of security USB key containing a top secret list of field agents… which gets accidentally eaten by his Scottish Terrier, McCloud. )

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    Thanks for the comment Kriss. Yup, it's a sitcom, mostly farce.

    Thanks for the comment Kriss. Yup, it’s a sitcom, mostly farce.

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