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  1. Posted: November 29, 2012In: Public

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe.

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    Added an answer on November 29, 2012 at 9:34 am

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical cheese recipe.

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical cheese recipe.

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  2. Posted: November 29, 2012In: Public

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe.

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    Added an answer on November 29, 2012 at 9:32 am

    Cheers. Do you mean: "When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook." Seems to work OK too. Although I do like the term "ancient, mystical duck recipe.". It's a bit absurd and I find makes people laugh... which always helps.

    Cheers. Do you mean:

    “When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook.”

    Seems to work OK too.

    Although I do like the term “ancient, mystical duck recipe.”. It’s a bit absurd and I find makes people laugh… which always helps.

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  3. Posted: November 14, 2012In: Public

    To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists. Michael's friend Harry seeks help dealing with a dishonest truck driver.

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    Added an answer on November 14, 2012 at 5:47 am

    Heya. To me, it sounds like: "To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists." Sounds like the logline for the whole series and "Michael's fRead more

    Heya. To me, it sounds like:

    “To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists.” Sounds like the logline for the whole series and

    “Michael’s friend Harry seeks help dealing with a dishonest truck driver.” Sounds like the log line for one episode.

    I’m also doing a TV series. I’ve been keeping the loglines completely separate (one for the series plus one for each episode) which I find tough as:
    – The series has a group of protagonists, and various antagonists.
    – Each episode is closer to a single-character arc. (Well, the logline is anyway). Even if an episode has a B-plot and a C-Plot, I’m only putting the A-Plot in the Logline.

    I don’t have a definitive answer on this, would love to hear from others.

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