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When an earthquake infests an apartment complex with fast-breeding spiders, a young entomologist's plan to save the residents means forcing a war veteran survivalist from his home.
I saw your main plot as what Blake Snyder describes as 'monster in the house'...(there would be more tension if ALL tenants were trapped inside...more victims etc...) Maybe they could turn to an exterminator, but who then also falls victim to the eight legged freaks..? I don't know. To be honest, myRead more
I saw your main plot as what Blake Snyder describes as ‘monster in the house’…(there would be more tension if ALL tenants were trapped inside…more victims etc…) Maybe they could turn to an exterminator, but who then also falls victim to the eight legged freaks..? I don’t know.
To be honest, my example was just how you could deal with the whole entomologist/ amateur/ no degree issue — the ‘hook’ imho, is not the fact that the hero ‘bonds’ with anyone — a great subplot/ ‘B’ story for sure, but the fact that the hero is an 11 year old geeky kid who’s into entomology… for the sake of describing the arch plot in the logline, the war veteran doesn’t require a mention — but that’s just from what I have gathered from your posts… He might be crucial to your story..? I don’t know.
Anyway — best of luck with it.
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When an apartment block is overcome by huge deadly spiders the tenants turn the only person who has a chance to save them ? an geeky 11 year entomology enthusiast
When an apartment block is overcome by huge deadly spiders the tenants turn the only person who has a chance to save them ? an geeky 11 year entomology enthusiast
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