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In the spirit of Christmas Eve, an officer lets a drag queen go free. But when the decapitated body turns up in a dumpster, he must find the murderer to clear his name and conscience.
A guilt ridden rookie cop goes on a personal crusade to find the killer of a transsexual prostitute he set free from a L.A. jail on Christmas Eve.
A guilt ridden rookie cop goes on a personal crusade to find the killer of a transsexual prostitute he set free from a L.A. jail on Christmas Eve.
See lessIn a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.
Sorry -- I missed that the hero is a 'He' Just my take below: "A reclusive home-schooled teenager becomes the star forward for the varsity basketball team but struggles against?public ?ridicule when he is ?outed ?for being the bastard son of a local prostitute." No real improvement, but just my takeRead more
Sorry — I missed that the hero is a ‘He’
Just my take below:
“A reclusive home-schooled teenager becomes the star forward for the varsity basketball team but struggles against?public ?ridicule when he is ?outed ?for being the bastard son of a local prostitute.”
No real improvement, but just my take. Best of luck – I like. 🙂
See lessIn a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.
Hi DPG, To bring the word count to under 30 words you could lose the setting -- I'm not sure how vital that is to communicating the essence of the story. The only other issue in my mind is that I'm left wanting to know what she does as a result of the bullying..? Or, to put it another way, is it herRead more
Hi DPG,
To bring the word count to under 30 words you could lose the setting — I’m not sure how vital that is to communicating the essence of the story.
The only other issue in my mind is that I’m left wanting to know what she does as a result of the bullying..? Or, to put it another way, is it her goal to excel in varsity basketball or overcome the bullies?
Cheers.
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