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A self-centered play critic struggles to re-build his life when a scathing review he writes drives a playwright to suicide, by becoming a playwright himself.
Yes -- definitely clunky -- thanks for your take nicholasandrewhalls, much tighter. I think the WHY issue comes from the fact I've labeled him 'self-centered' -- as in, if this guy is self centered why would he care if someone killed themselves because of one of his reviews..? Something to work on.Read more
Yes — definitely clunky — thanks for your take nicholasandrewhalls, much tighter. I think the WHY issue comes from the fact I’ve labeled him ‘self-centered’ — as in, if this guy is self centered why would he care if someone killed themselves because of one of his reviews..? Something to work on. And yes — ‘theater critic’ probably is the correct terminology. The driver for this logline was to have a play with ‘irony’ — now just have to look at this guy’s motivation (if he is self centered…)
Thanks again.
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See lessA man who blacks out for seven hours each night has feared the day when his two lives collide, and when they do, the lives of millions hang in the balance.
...Yep - that's exactly how it reads (dpg). Does he go to sleep, slip into unconsciousness, then another side of his personality wakes up, goes out and does things that jeopardize the lives of millions of people? A bit confusing. I think you would need to be very specific as to what actually occursRead more
…Yep – that’s exactly how it reads (dpg). Does he go to sleep, slip into unconsciousness, then another side of his personality wakes up, goes out and does things that jeopardize the lives of millions of people? A bit confusing. I think you would need to be very specific as to what actually occurs for this to make sense. Without giving us the REASON why millions of lives hang in the balance it reads a bit like a tagline as opposed to a logline.
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