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When a hooker attempts to steal a wallet from a drunken john, she accidentally makes a horrific discovery — the couple is not alone in a shabby room of a love hotel.
Those are all good points. I will try to rework it. "Love Hotel" is something that is very common in Asia (the story takes place in Tokyo), and it is a place where people go for a tryst and pay by hour. Daniel, it would be good if the wallet played such a role, however, that's not what happens. WhilRead more
Those are all good points. I will try to rework it. “Love Hotel” is something that is very common in Asia (the story takes place in Tokyo), and it is a place where people go for a tryst and pay by hour.
Daniel, it would be good if the wallet played such a role, however, that’s not what happens. While a customer is taking a shower, the hooker checks his pockets and finds the wallet. He abruptly steps out of the shower catching her in a act. She then throws the wallet under the bed.
It is upon retrieving that wallet that she discovers a corpse under the bed — that is what’s so horrific about it…
See lessWhen a hooker attempts to steal a wallet from a drunken john, she accidentally makes a horrific discovery — the couple is not alone in a shabby room of a love hotel.
Those are all good points. I will try to rework it. "Love Hotel" is something that is very common in Asia (the story takes place in Tokyo), and it is a place where people go for a tryst and pay by hour. Daniel, it would be good if the wallet played such a role, however, that's not what happens. WhilRead more
Those are all good points. I will try to rework it. “Love Hotel” is something that is very common in Asia (the story takes place in Tokyo), and it is a place where people go for a tryst and pay by hour.
Daniel, it would be good if the wallet played such a role, however, that’s not what happens. While a customer is taking a shower, the hooker checks his pockets and finds the wallet. He abruptly steps out of the shower catching her in a act. She then throws the wallet under the bed.
It is upon retrieving that wallet that she discovers a corpse under the bed — that is what’s so horrific about it…
See lessWhen well-mannered Japanese woman notices a an enormous boogger hanging out of a nose of her American date, she has to make a tough choice either to tell him and jeopardize brewing romance or endure in disgust.
It actually plays very well, and it's nine minutes long. I guarantee you'd shit your pants from laughing if you see that thing. I feel unashamed praising it, since it isn't mine, I am just assisting in submitting it to festivals. Here are my improvements, let me know what you think of them. "On a 2nRead more
It actually plays very well, and it’s nine minutes long. I guarantee you’d shit your pants from laughing if you see that thing. I feel unashamed praising it, since it isn’t mine, I am just assisting in submitting it to festivals.
Here are my improvements, let me know what you think of them.
“On a 2nd date, a polite Japanese woman sees a booger in the nose of her American companion. She wrestles with her horrifying choice:Tell him, jeopardizing their budding romance or endure the conversation, trying to hide her disgust and discomfort.”
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