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  1. Posted: August 25, 2014In: Public

    When well-mannered Japanese woman notices a an enormous boogger hanging out of a nose of her American date, she has to make a tough choice either to tell him and jeopardize brewing romance or endure in disgust.

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    Added an answer on August 29, 2014 at 11:25 am

    It actually plays very well, and it's nine minutes long. I guarantee you'd shit your pants from laughing if you see that thing. I feel unashamed praising it, since it isn't mine, I am just assisting in submitting it to festivals. Here are my improvements, let me know what you think of them. "On a 2nRead more

    It actually plays very well, and it’s nine minutes long. I guarantee you’d shit your pants from laughing if you see that thing. I feel unashamed praising it, since it isn’t mine, I am just assisting in submitting it to festivals.

    Here are my improvements, let me know what you think of them.

    “On a 2nd date, a polite Japanese woman sees a booger in the nose of her American companion. She wrestles with her horrifying choice:Tell him, jeopardizing their budding romance or endure the conversation, trying to hide her disgust and discomfort.”

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2013In: Public

    An assassin hired by means of text messages to kill a prominent mobster discovers he has been set up by the daughter of one of his father?s hits in a complex scheme of revenge.

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    Added an answer on May 28, 2013 at 4:30 pm

    I agree -- text messages or not, it isn't all that important. I posted a new version literally minutes ago that echos what you have suggested. "When a meticulous hitman is hired to kill a prominent mobster by means of text messages, he unwittingly becomes a tool in a complex scheme of revenge by a wRead more

    I agree — text messages or not, it isn’t all that important. I posted a new version literally minutes ago that echos what you have suggested.

    “When a meticulous hitman is hired to kill a prominent mobster by means of text messages, he unwittingly becomes a tool in a complex scheme of revenge by a woman he regards as nothing more than a one night stand.”

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